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Aftermath Page 3 by DerMonkey Aftermath Page 3 by DerMonkey
page three of the comic i did for uni. theme was 'virus'.
we had to produce 4 pages, somewhat difficult to me, because it's the first comic i ever did.

the entire theme is reduced to a very few moments, however i tried to bring the in a cinematic mood.
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EikoShido Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2010  Student General Artist
Uiuiui! I admire you style! Gnihihihi!
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DerMonkey Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2010  Student Digital Artist
xD cheers! :ahoy:
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AMUNpg Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009
looks cool i want to read more :D :D
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greensandsguy Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2009
O_o

der letzte frame is hammer!!! superbild!
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dasAdam Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009
ich hab mich in das letzte frame verliebt ^^
das wäre bestimmt ne geile abgefahren illustration die man draus machen könnte! allein die tatsache das der soldat so tot gefühlslos aussieht "ohne" augen

ich hab ja noch deine ersten versionen der seiten imkopf! hier kommt es wunderbar flüssig rüber wie sich dein char von der gruppe trennt! da ist dein "rauch" ein wunderbares element!
. er verschleiert und erleichtert die aktion und macht sie glaubwürdiger. im sinne von: "und er verschwand im nebel" =)
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DerMonkey Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009  Student Digital Artist
oh danke!
der rauch soll übrigens irgendein dekontaminations-zeug sein, das die überall versprühen. danke, du hast es genau so erfasst wie es gedacht war :)
das letzte panel is übrigens eigentlich das erste von seite 4 gewesen, aber aus platzgründen hab ichs doch noch auf seite 3 gezogen. obwohl ich nach wie vor denke, dass es auf seite 4 bessser gepasst hätte...
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dasAdam Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009
jo dekonta. hatte das erkannt =) wollte aber extra "rauch" verwenden. schreibt sich metaphermäßig viel schöner so =P

das letzte panel sitzt da perfekt. der erstarrte blick nach oben! und das als letzes frame. das hat diesen tollen serien charakter "FORTSETZUNG FOLGT" und das wenns am spannensten ist :D

also alles coolio
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dinmoney Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
panel 3 is my fav
nice
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DerMonkey Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009  Student Digital Artist
thx!
i really like the upper wall, how it's glared by the sun..^^
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NoBreakz Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh i love the last picture:D
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DerMonkey Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009  Student Digital Artist
thank you, me too! :D
it originally was the first panel of page 4, but i had to re-arange it and put it on this page.
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NoBreakz Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice:), good choice:)
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ZuluSplitter Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009
schöne perspektiven :-)
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Blackburnart Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
god I love them angles lol

I think you should put a bit more thought into the dialogue, the 2nd to last panel it is difficult to understand (for me anyway) what is going on. Maybe hes dieing or reaching down for something? because his other hand is not visible it is difficult to tell

just some thoughts, I love your panels so far though, keep it up dude
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DerMonkey Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009  Student Digital Artist
tahnk you!
i totally agree with you, text isn'T my strentgh at all. :D
john is actually the person who recognizes the town as the place where he grew up. then they suddenly are standing in front of his former street, where he lived. he splits up from the rest of the group. when they realize that he's gone (the last but one panel), it'S already too late.
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